The Beautiful Girl
There is someone who is so beautiful
she is a beautiful girl
she is a beautiful girl
she is a smart girl
she have a long hair
she have a good body like a guitar spain.
someday, I want to live with her and married with her
I also want to live with her in a special/private island.
someday, I want to live with her and married with her
I also want to live with her in a special/private island.
Hai Gearson, you have a good taste of visual description about the girl you're talking about in your poem. ^^ But i think you should pay attention to your grammar e.g : "She HAVE long hair" . Great job! Have a great lesson through making your poem. Thankyouu
BalasHapusHi clarina thanks for your correction about my poem..
BalasHapusyes I think i'm forget to add "A" but thanks for you attention and reading my poem.
i can be more attention about my grammar.
Hi gerson , i think your poem is good ,but it would be nice if you add a figure of speech to make it more interesting :)
BalasHapusoh thanks for your correction. I'm sure with you maybe I must add the figure.. oke thanks..
Hapus